วันอาทิตย์ที่ 29 พฤศจิกายน พ.ศ. 2552

A Childhood Memory

A Childhood Memory

I am 20 years old and I can surly say that childhood is a wonderful time of my life. A lot of people want to go back to childhood. They want to be children again but some people don't want to remember their childhood. I grow up in a family, surrounded with love and care their childhood as the happiest time of their life. In holidays when the family has a free-time, they will take me to go to amusement park. I remember their first day at school, I wanted to come back my home. I wanted to be near my father and my mother. However childhood is the happiest time of my life. I always remember childhood with a smile upon my face. Now, I want to go back to childhood again, about 6 years old.
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  1. P a t t y * ;)6 ธันวาคม 2552 เวลา 09:47

    I can sure say = I can surely say

    I who grow up in a family = I grow up in .....

    the happiest time of their life. = their lives

    I remember that "my" first day at school

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    Should be Past simple tense

    I wanted* to come back my home. I wanted* to be near my parents.*




    PS. amusement park. = Dream World ???? hahaha
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